Review Detail of BadStripes in The Hero's Mask

Author's Review: The beginning is a bit shabby. It could have been better if I had the writing skills or had put more effort into it. The stability of updates is not the best, and I will sometimes do weekly uploads or daily. Depends on my mood, imagination, and motivation. Overall the updates(to me) are the worst part. I am doing my best to improve my writing skills, make things more interesting and make them make sense. I can't accurately review my world background or character design. That is for you readers to decide. Please leave feedback with your thoughts and suggestions on how I can make something better, and criticism is welcomed.