Review Detail of RogueAkon in The Return Of The Exalted

Hey Guys RogueAkon here. I'm not here to shamelessly review on my novel here. Just want ask the opinions of yours, If you like this novel or not please comment me or review it. So I can create it better. So I'm Newby in writing so with your comments negative or positive, I can understand better and improve my writing skill. So get some time and comments. And sorry for my writing and grammar mistakes. See Ya! Love You.