Review Detail of Empyrium in One Piece: Zayn The Celestial Dragon

So here is a honest review, nnot hese 5 stars ratings. Writing quality: It is really bad, so many mistakes it is so annoying, there is no sentence with no mistakes, often it are so stupid mistakes. Story development: There really isn't a story, he can enslave anybody he wants so he could enslave the whole world, end of the story. So there won't be any ffights hich are dangeours for him because he can just buy op skills/enslave the enemy. Character design: He is overpowered and seems a bit crazy with his wierd laugh, at the end of the day he is just a crazy person with power. Update stability: 12 chapter a week what he has for now is really good, 5 stars World background: I mean it is One Piece, so yeah nothing special. Fazit: The he is way to overpowered, he is already at the top of rhe world even before chapter 20. The bbad rammar is really ruining the story so I don't recommend to read it, only of you are bored.