to be honest the concept is there. the story should be there too, but your writing quality is terrible. worse than mtl in my opinion which should say something. get an editor. and stop rushing the story
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GOSTARShame_less007:thanks for the review bro...I would like to get my story edited after sometime, if you are still interested then you can read at that time
Shame_less007:thanks for the review bro...I would like to get my story edited after sometime, if you are still interested then you can read at that time
you really have to edit the story. hire a proof reader. when I read last time, i remember the story was really good, one top novel in webnovel. your English is really bad.you have to really fix this. you view count definitely will be 4 times Higher than, now it is.
Shame_less007:nope.. 😥
Author should edit it by now, I've read far enough and I understood somewhat that this would be a hit when you can just fix that problem. really really hope you would because I don't want to see a work that has potential to rival the top works in webnovel and would just get buried by those that originate in english but are bad quality. Novel has everything planted but lacks on one thing, English which has a lot of viewers
Shame_less007:nope.. 😥
JRCaste:Author should edit it by now, I've read far enough and I understood somewhat that this would be a hit when you can just fix that problem. really really hope you would because I don't want to see a work that has potential to rival the top works in webnovel and would just get buried by those that originate in english but are bad quality. Novel has everything planted but lacks on one thing, English which has a lot of viewers