Review Detail of Luminous_Arcadian in Solitude's Requiem
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It was an interesting story. I like the plotline, and the writing style was easy to read and understand. However, I hope the chapters could be longer, and the author could also add more details to the description. Minor problems were the misuse of punctuation marks, a few typos, and capitalization of the starting words. So far, I think this story has potential and could grow more. I wish good luck to the author!
Solitude's Requiem
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I also share your opinion that my chapters are way too short. That's something I slowly am trying to change as I start feeling more comfortable on how to write. Descriptions idem. I will probably go back and re-edit once I come to a point where the story could take a break (probably after first volume).