Review Detail of Mepo in The Devils Crown

Solid story so far. The first chapter leaves you with questions that make you crave more, and the it's pretty interesting. Only peeve I have is the author does this thing where something is establish something such as the MC's eyes being bi-colored, and it reiterate. Which is fine, but I feel the author does it that teeny bit too much in some areas. Other than that, I like it so far. Can't wait to see more author.