Review Detail of Bored_Writer in An Unorthodox, Interdimensional Weapons Shop

Rating my own book due to boredom. I only have a semblance of an idea of how to write so I appreciate any constructive critisism. Uploading schedule is nonexistent as I am primarly focusing on my schooling rather than my hobbies. I will make an attempt to upload a few chapters every month but if I fail to deliver I apologize.