Review Detail of Thazumaki in I Am The Weakest

I truly wish to say few words to everyone reading or that is yet to read my novel! I'll keep it short; Firstly I would thank everyone giving me a chance, first time writing a novel and I'm glad it got handful of views in such amount of time. World building and main events should start happening after chapter 15+ as that's about time I need to deepen Sion as a main character. Bear with the slow start and I assure everyone great things are awaiting in future! Please leave a comment and a review, even it's criticism and negative feedback, I'm very interested in everyone's thoughts and ideas!