Review Detail of BlueBlueLemon in Meta Human

This is a review a to motivate and hopefully help the author for later chapters. Since there are barely any chapters yet, I will base mostly on the synopsis for the plot... There are interesting points provided on the synopsis that can easily attract people. But it would be better if author rewrite and fix it to appeal more. The best thing so far is the world background. I can see its potential to be one of this book strong point depending on how the author will continue. And the part where it needs the most improvement, is the technical writing. I am not an English teacherbor anything, but it can be a turn off when some paragraphs are difficult to read. I suggested something in the comments so I hope author sees it. In conclusion. The strong points of the book for the meantime is little. This can be attributed to the lack of chapters, but with good premise, there is a chance for this to be great.