The Character Design and World Background is fine and Even Though I Only Read A Few Chapters, I Can Also Tell That The Story is Developing Well. But I Have A Few Comments Regarding Some Problems That I Noticed In The Earlier Chapters in the Novel. One, There's No Dialogue Whatsover. Lastly, The Author is giving way too many Details About What's Happening in the Novel All The Time. I Mean, This is The First Time Ever That I Have Seen A Novel With No Dialouge and Just Details and Narrating.
Tim.B.Suana
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GOSTARI guess maybe you didn't know this...but that pen name is my third pen name. This is my own pen name that I use in Webnovel. And yes I am the author of this novel.
Tim_B_Suana_18:Hello there, thanks for giving your comments about the novel.😄 But can I ask you something (if you don't mind me asking)? Are you really sure you didn't see any conversation at all?😅