Review Detail of Yoan_Roturier in Laura’s love story

So far so good. Honestly haven't read much because it's not my cup of tea but from what I've read it's heading the right direction. However, I'd suggest removing chapters 1 and 2. These are... a bit unnecessary in my opinion. Your synopsis can be found on the book's main page and the part about inkstone.... well readers don't really care about it.