That was a great start dear Jakkanim. The start was bit common but the main game starts from the second chapter. I like the FL because she is funny instead of strong after the next chance and blah blah type FLs. I would love to see more mocking moments between ML and FL. Those minor grammar mistakes could be easily corrected so there is no issue. Overall the story has great potential and waiting for more updates.
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