This is a very nice novel with a very solid plot. The novel is told from many different perspectives so it's very easy to understand each major character. There are multiple capitalization mistakes since majority of your sentences start with a common letter and a few punctuation errors for example, sometimes where you should have a question mark, you have a full stop. Overall, the novel has great potential. I personally really like the plot and the synopsis is a perfect 10/10 attention grabber. [img=recommend]
dinoriii
Liked it!
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