Okay okay! Nice novel if I may say. The start is good, overall the first 3 chapters are amazing. The only problem is that why do you have so many words in your chapter? I think each of your chapter has 4k+ words. If you break those down, you could've already have 7 or more chapters. I expect good expectations from you, Good luck Author in your journey. ;))
Rinal_Cruz
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GOSTARIf you change the cover of the novel to attract followers The novel is great, but the picture and the name do not attract attention
Rinal_Cruz:thanks for the review... :) i'll try to break down some of the chapter in the next one. again, thanks for the review...