Review Detail of Fenris321 in Reincarnated as Emiya in Fate/kaleid [DROPPED]
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There isn’t much to go on, so I’ll make it snappy. Pro’s - No filler (or all filler depending on how you look at it). Good pace overall. - Decent prose, details could use some work, but the clarity is on point. - I didn’t feel the need to call the FBI even once, very impressive. Cons - Heavy reliance on source material for inital investment and characterization. - Introduction is fumbling around. - MC is kinda stupid wothout reason, and a chunni. - The author dosen’t like his own work; which is a recipe for disaster. Especially for a fan project. -Constant 4th wall breaks for no reason. Not good, but not bad. Still, for a first tike hobby project; it shows you got potential.
Reincarnated as Emiya in Fate/kaleid [DROPPED]
kurit_kun
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Correction, it's not that I don't like my novel, it's just that I think I could be a lot better. At the begging I did not know where I was going to do with this fanfic. Should it be more drama, comedy, action or maybe slice of life? I didn't even decide what kind if person mc should be. Later on I found out how i want to write it and even have plans for future events. So don't worry i don't hate it, I'm more disappointed in myself than anything else
I was enjoying it at first but then it became soo confusing So much stuff happening at once and Emiyas constantly switches from alpha to simp and then back is really getting irritating after a few chapters. It's just not that interesting right now.
kurit_kun:Correction, it's not that I don't like my novel, it's just that I think I could be a lot better. At the begging I did not know where I was going to do with this fanfic. Should it be more drama, comedy, action or maybe slice of life? I didn't even decide what kind if person mc should be. Later on I found out how i want to write it and even have plans for future events. So don't worry i don't hate it, I'm more disappointed in myself than anything else