Review Detail of Jo_J in ALLISON'S SECOND CHANCE AT LOVE

From the synopsis, I see that you have an interesting plan for the story. The plot is intriguing, I wonder how you will show Leonardo's struggle for feelings and sympathy, Sam. So I'm waiting for more... ;) Don't worry about errors. Every serious writer has an editor who cares about the consistency of the text, flow, grammar, etc., but here, we do most of the things ourselves.