Review Detail of Masterofall1 in The Life of a ghost across the Multiverse! *Old* *Rework in progress*

Okay, so the first world he goes into he can't mess with the plot at all, now in Fairy Tail the plot is so far gone that it doesn't exist. I find it hard to care at all about the plot of the fanfiction when he's just thrust before extremely overpowered individuals and just strong-armed to do things for them. I started reading this as I thought it was gonna be like uncle Iroh and he was going to actually helped people and grow alongside his helping, but this has just been a disappointment the first 15 chapters are completely useless, and then with the fairy tail thing he's basically forced into being a slave for Marvis & Zeref, sugar-coated under the prefix of 'brother' of Wendy whom in the AU of Fairy Tail is the daughter of Marvis & Zeref. This brings me to another point of inconsistency, in which if she's the daughter of Marvis & Zeref how is it, she went through the time gate and has Grandeeny inside her? ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------