Your story is great The magic system is interesting That it is base off to be understanding of the elements or magic Thank you for making It no harem For your main character But i hope you do add some romance . still focus on the main story plot. I believe that he should have move on with his past life. Unless there a Concept thaT his life span would increase like othe wizard story but still he should hAve some form of relationship experience. Keep Up the story
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