Review Detail of Skully in System Break
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Shameless author disavows all responsibility for shameless MC. The MC is writing this story, not me. This story is written in first person and with the voice of the main character. If he thinks or behaves like a misgonyst these are not my views. They're his and I bear no responsibility. If there are shameless, low-brow similies, they're all his. I would never write "climbs like a monkey on cocaine." This comparison is beneath my litery talent, surely I could come up with something more peotic. In my real life i beleive in one woman (at a time) - the MC has no such quandaries and will willing bang anything that moves. To the relevant others in my life, again, this is not my views. Lastly, do not think his sexual exploits are something I dream of doing. I basically watch a certain website and just describe what I see. I hope you enjoy the story and most of all find it interesting.
System Break
Skully
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I don't like that there are so few reviews and those few reviews only have good ratings here. I don't like how you put that nothing that you have written 'from his perspective' has nothing to do with you either. I also don't like the synopsis or the "reviews". I basically don't like any of the stuff I see here, it's all too weird and 'off-putting?' maybe one day things here will change, but for now I won't even try, who knows, one day when I look here again I find some decency...
I wish more people would review also. But look at the reviewers, they're real readers and not fake accounts or other authors. I've got a linktree link to all my other stuff if you wanted to know more about me and really there's 50 chapters and 75k words to work out if its any good or not. The time it took you to write this comment you could have read the first chapter but its genuine so ill think about the synopsis.
MonoNautilus:I don't like that there are so few reviews and those few reviews only have good ratings here. I don't like how you put that nothing that you have written 'from his perspective' has nothing to do with you either. I also don't like the synopsis or the "reviews". I basically don't like any of the stuff I see here, it's all too weird and 'off-putting?' maybe one day things here will change, but for now I won't even try, who knows, one day when I look here again I find some decency...
Okay. I rewrote the synopsis. If you're up for it, let me know what you think... .. I have some readers who leave lovely comment and dont review. And then I see novels with 1M views and only 25 reviews and others with 20k views and 30 reviews... ... The reason I dont have many is because I dont do author swaps and i dont use level 1 accounts to write my own 20 reviews for myself. And the fact my readers dont think I deserve one!! [img=faceslap]
MonoNautilus:I don't like that there are so few reviews and those few reviews only have good ratings here. I don't like how you put that nothing that you have written 'from his perspective' has nothing to do with you either. I also don't like the synopsis or the "reviews". I basically don't like any of the stuff I see here, it's all too weird and 'off-putting?' maybe one day things here will change, but for now I won't even try, who knows, one day when I look here again I find some decency...
the synopsis is like, 10x better than before, I can have a clearer view now and know a little more where I'm putting my feet into. I will put your story in my Try list, download and read it when I have time to read something.
Skully:Okay. I rewrote the synopsis. If you're up for it, let me know what you think... .. I have some readers who leave lovely comment and dont review. And then I see novels with 1M views and only 25 reviews and others with 20k views and 30 reviews... ... The reason I dont have many is because I dont do author swaps and i dont use level 1 accounts to write my own 20 reviews for myself. And the fact my readers dont think I deserve one!! [img=faceslap]