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It's a good story. I'm into mystical and creepy lands. (don't ask me why) The first chap was a little slow but the later ones had good pacing. the grammar and the use of tense could use a little work but overall, this was a good read.
Temari and the Crown Prince
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Foxy_Fairy:thank you for this review! I should go check the first chapter and see what I can do to make it better then. Really appreciate this comment :)