Review Detail of ZEN_F in Another World with Minecraft System

well for starters the mc is braindead second you didn't explain anything about him thirdly you haven't "shown"us anything about the surroundings environment except the river you also failed to provide any "time" by that I mean how long it took him to get to the river and the other stuff il add more stuff after you post more chapters.

thank you mans, i actually want write new novel as this novel a completely a trash, and it will be extremely hard for me rewrite it...