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Review Detail of Suoshi in The Finals Light of Hope

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Suoshi
SuoshiLv23yrSuoshi

Interesting story. I read a few chapters which were enough o know that you have a good sense of grammar and language but it certainly needs to be improved. Don't mind me saying, but of course you'll improve along the way. Anyways, the plot's pretty good. Keep it up!

The Finals Light of Hope

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Zhang_Awei
Zhang_AweiAutorZhang_Awei

Thank you for your advice. I will try my best to fix my grammar and writing.