Review Detail of Lemon_wrights in The Aborted Demigod

Ok, I think the story could be a lot better if you didn't rush it at the start and instead went into more detail about the mc and the world around her. The spelling, punctuation, and grammar could have been better and made the book more professional like instead of using "u" it should have been "you". that's all I needed to say. But the overall pretty cool concept, just a little rushed.