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MunCL
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GOSTARInstead of telling some parts of story just say the character's introduction and his goal.Also,I did not understand the synopsis
MunCL:Seriously? Any suggestions? Please, give me your opinion 😇
No problem with that as long as you enjoy writing for the cause of writing but not as a way to make some quick buck, which comes across from your comment. No one is born a writer…. It takes dedication and effort. And that starts with a well thought out introduction. I will read a few pages of your work and give my opinion when I’m done. Have a nice weekend.
MunCL:Sorry, I'm newbie,, 🥺🥺
Thank you so much for your support🥰 I'll do my best,, Being a global writer is something new for me. When I started, I also continued to learn. Thank you for you opinion 💞
KingGeorg:No problem with that as long as you enjoy writing for the cause of writing but not as a way to make some quick buck, which comes across from your comment. No one is born a writer…. It takes dedication and effort. And that starts with a well thought out introduction. I will read a few pages of your work and give my opinion when I’m done. Have a nice weekend.
Lord_Meph1sto:U could have gone with better names for characters. Ken and Jerry kinda ruin the kingdom vibe for me. Just a suggestion tho.
akira3:i have read the novel to chapter 5 and i did not understand anything. you should edit it
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