Review Detail of Devon_Cota in Naruto: Overpowered Shinobi

Item: Naruto: Overpowered Shinobi
Rating: 5

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Devon_CotaLv153yrDevon_Cota

Honestly writing qualities really good,the story's really good,your character is awesome,and I love the powers you gave him the only problem I see is that it seems you forget what you wrote in the past just small details here and there nothing really big but thats my review keep it up looking forward for the next chapter

Naruto: Overpowered Shinobi

CalmNature

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CalmNatureAutorCalmNature

Thanks for the review. Yeah, I also noticed that I forget some things cause I dont read my own chapters and dont have any story board. My next fanfic wont have any these problems ^^ I already have a rough story outline but nothing writtwn yet.

3yr

Arekuruu_TentoLv12Arekuruu_Tento

I advise you to use this one as a learning/improvement base and not rush to make another story unless this one is completed. just my opinion/advise as a fellow author, but you own your story so don't listen to rant if you want.

CalmNature:Thanks for the review. Yeah, I also noticed that I forget some things cause I dont read my own chapters and dont have any story board. My next fanfic wont have any these problems ^^ I already have a rough story outline but nothing writtwn yet.

3yr

Arekuruu_TentoLv12Arekuruu_Tento

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Arekuruu_Tento:I advise you to use this one as a learning/improvement base and not rush to make another story unless this one is completed. just my opinion/advise as a fellow author, but you own your story so don't listen to rant if you want.
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