I liked the story very much but for me, what lacked in the first chap was the setting like where are they talking. The details about the world too hehe..... But all in all, a good read. You write well when it comes to dialogues so you know what to do. 😉 Even better than me....hehe
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GOSTARMeja_duduk:yeah, i already have my style about this. Dialogues is the main that I have for write more and more, for the narration is being hard than I imagined. I will work hard for this, thx