Review Detail of Bierbart in Reincarnate in dxd world

Well would normally be too lazy to comment, but i saw your age in the author comment. Language wise it could be better, but considering the author said he/her is 15 so there is a lot of time to grow. The Characters seem rather simple minded and childish. Same with the humor and comedy part. The narrative and the story development seem rather random and mixed. So keep going.