Review Detail of NiceGuy in Otaku journey!

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NiceGuyLv123yrNiceGuy

it's a real good story, but i would like to provide my unnecessary input to the author: 1) Please try to proofread if you can, but it's not much important, so even if you don't it works for me 2) Please make sure the MC doesn't start getting girls like Ash catching Pokemons, currently the pace is good, but just don't everyone to his Harem 3) Maybe make Fi go SkyNet just for fun? (a recommendation)

Otaku journey!

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lazy_doorAutorlazy_door

Sorry for the question! SkyNet is from Terminator, right?

3yr

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lazy_doorAutorlazy_door

Thank you for your advice!

3yr

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NiceGuyLv12NiceGuy

yes😁

lazy_door:Sorry for the question! SkyNet is from Terminator, right?

3yr

4

CodeZeroZeroLv14CodeZeroZero

Is it harem?

lazy_door:Thank you for your advice!

3yr

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lazy_doorAutorlazy_door

yes, but a very small 3-4 girls, maybe a little more, because the MC will still go to other worlds)

CodeZeroZero:Is it harem?

3yr

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Man_of_culture_69Lv2Man_of_culture_69

How many gonna be harem? Pls don't make more than 10 members in harem theb story gonna get dull

lazy_door:Thank you for your advice!

3yr

2

gamabunda4873Lv5gamabunda4873

not if the author is a good writer

Man_of_culture_69:How many gonna be harem? Pls don't make more than 10 members in harem theb story gonna get dull

3yr

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HONORLv4HONOR

update author Kun 🙏

lazy_door:Sorry for the question! SkyNet is from Terminator, right?

2yr

BreezyNovelsLv5BreezyNovels

Whose in the harem?

lazy_door:yes, but a very small 3-4 girls, maybe a little more, because the MC will still go to other worlds)

1yr

Chaos_Order8Lv4Chaos_Order8

I don't get it? U mean 2 to 3 in each world or in the whole story ?

lazy_door:yes, but a very small 3-4 girls, maybe a little more, because the MC will still go to other worlds)

1yr