Review Detail of mozza_mello in MY CHANCE IN THE APOCALYPTIC WORLD

Aye this is great! :D The writing style is unique, I'd say :3 I really like how you portrayed our world's condition, and thank you for raising awareness! :D Love your way of describing things and adding tension hehe! Maybe some of the triple dots can be changed for a comma, but that's just a suggestion :3 Great work, author! <3