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Review Detail of Daoists1bRjB in Lord of Slaughter

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there are many errors, the setting of the novel is okay but the author when describing a scene he/she does not describe fully the novel has imagery, a sense of hearing, sight, touch

Lord of Slaughter

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Thank you very much for your feedback. Am sorry for the errors this my first time writing a novel.