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Review Detail of Gaulix in One piece: Majestic Eyes

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Gaulix
GaulixLv23yrGaulix

The author enslaved all the characters and ordered them to be the background for the main character. - That's how this fanfiction feels. You read and think how convenient everything is, and the pirates leave loot in the bodies, allowing the hero to pick up the remnants, the main characters just nod to all requests, a soulless story turns out.

One piece: Majestic Eyes

_Khaled_

Curtido por 12 pessoas

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Respostas2

notlair
notlairLv5notlair

the fact that Rayleigh agreed to train him feels too convenient

AnRa
AnRaLv13AnRa

I agree man, Rayleigh don't know the MC at all yet he agree to train him, its to convenient, the interaction between each character have no soul at all.