Review Detail of Zhoa_Fei in Sign in to lord god

This one is a bit rough around the edges, but it could transition into something interesting down the line if cultivated properly. Structuring the story a bit better is probably a smart move, and correcting some pesky grammatical mistakes. There were some unnecessary and inconsistent capitalizations. Work on the main character some more, but that's a given. Overall 6/10 premise. Keep working on it. A pleasant experience.