Review Detail of MarieMeadowthorn in Morphing Iniquity

Okay, so don't read too much into the score, as it's just my opinion from the first five chapters I was able to read. (don't have any coins rn.) It gets a little jumbled, and hard to follow through with a specific storyline. There are parts that are clear and wonderful. Very profound, forward thinking, and very introspective. I found myself captivated by your writing despite being confused at times because of that. Since I don't know what happens past the Paper Towns chapter, I just want to say that for the first five that even without a lot of information about what the characters look like, what the world looks like, and the moments of confusion when names are switched around or the writing seems a little different, it was quite amazing.