it was enjoyable, a great time killer but i had trouble understanding the story, i can't say much about world-building since i only read 50 chapters character development was also good if a bit stiff. the only thing that i found odd was him going after a married women with two kids but its the olden times so what evre
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Liked it!
GOSTARmistermoon:may i ask what your posting schedule is? i really did enjoy this and am looking forward to more