Review Detail of Erfan_Sh in Irregular: Shadow in Light

Item: Irregular: Shadow in Light
Rating: 5

Detalhe da revisão

Erfan_ShLv12yrErfan_Sh

Hmm, the premise does feel unique. The character's dialogues are well lined up with the story setting. the writing quality can be improved further. All in all a promising novel. looking forward to more chapters

Irregular: Shadow in Light

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geewintGAutorgeewintG

Thank you for taking the time to read however I would like to know what you found in the first few chapters that could be improved? Constructive feedback and criticisms would aid me a lot and are welcomed.

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