Review Detail of geewintG in ISLAND OF MEMORIES

The story itself is fine, however, I've come across multiple grammatical mistakes. The dialogue tags needs more work as well as the descriptions to create more in-depth connection to the reader. There are at times where punctuations are lacking. I've come across in chapter 2 where the dialogue is in all caps, I don't know whether they were shouting or just a distinction from the narration. Despite this, the story flow is nice and has some plot advancement in the first few parts. Keep up the good work.