Review Detail of GreenSamurai in WHOSE ALPHA?

This is after reading chapter one. The writing is great, it's not perfect but no one is, no problem staying immersed in the story. The only noticeable problem I could cast is that the time it takes to explain that the MC is a thief. That can be considered bad on almost any format but this site. That's gaming the system and I can't take points off for that. If the tags are something you like then give it a shot.