Review Detail of davexlee in Alive bond
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I love how the characters interact, they were lively without making your words seems messy. I have a suggestion, to be more careful with the punctuation mark. For me personally the forgotten space or the unavailability of punctuation mark kind of ruin the mood but it's only something minor.
Alive bond
eyaggelia146
Liked it!
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It got posted before I finished my review 😂 anyway, moving on. The leads are so funny with each other. Writing this in 3rd person view make the situation so much humoring because each and every character was guessing each other's mind. The main idea is easy to spot, very enjoyable to read and its moving to more promising chapter. Keep up the good work dear Author🥰
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