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the novel is meh~~ slow as **** it has 30 chapters and it feels like a prologue as its barely at the beginning of MHA story, overly dramatic with the MC going into comas for years because of him healing his mother when she was on labor when he was 6? and that is when he has a inner world and sensu seeds since his birth! but he didn't even bother to grow some sensu beans for emergencies. bullshit trivulations like some Chinese novel cus plot, system getting a life, etc! the novel is not bad but it just have so many things i personally dislike! also feels like the MC will be a simp that cant even breath without asking for permission from his girls!

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Moon's Journey Across the Multiverse

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Mayushiiii
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yeah , I also feel the same. that's why I will reboot it to be more refined. I also need to add the power scaling, character Sheet bla bla bla