An interesting intro! Right to the action! And as I can see, I can feel anime vibes from it! To my fellow countrymen, I am proud to one who writes in english. This review is not bias because I have seen some typos but you will notice it when you mature as an author! or hire an editor or proofreader in the future! It can guide you to be the better version of yourself! All in all Kudos on your work!
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