Review Detail of HarpGrand in I am back, But as a divine hunter

I'm giving this a serious review. I suggest you read more books and try to learn from them. When writing, use google docs or MS word. It will help you a lot to get better. You can start with fixing the synopsis first because it's the first thing that the readers will see when the find your book. You need to leave a good impression for them to actually press that 'Read' button.