its a good idea. thr way the world works is also good but the biggest issue is have so far its character description. you don't take the time to describe what characters look like and that is concerning, especially for the important ones. if its difficult to do so then find a picture that describes your important characters, thr means to put them in the book is available on webnovel.
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