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Review Detail of Everythinger_Kumar in Bloody Kisses

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Everythinger_Kumar
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First of all, I am a bit tentative when it comes to plots like these. Especially those which are in first person narration. But what's interesting is how you have intricately managed to have a consistent and a smooth proceeding of the plot. The world background in your story is great because it is balanced and descriptive at the same time. Overall, solid job! Good luck!

Bloody Kisses

Ruby

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