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Looking great so far, I'm really enjoying it and can only hope that you don't drop this. Can you add a description of the main character's appearance in an Auxiliary Chapter? I feel like a lot of people would like to know this, and most importantly the gender of the MC. Finally, I would like to note that you could try to focus a bit more on build up when you are going to end the chapter. Cheers to your future success🥂!

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Piyobee

Liked it!

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Thank you for the critic! Yes I will definitely try to describe the characters more thoroughly in future chapters. I'll also draw some characters so readers can visualize them better :3