Review Detail of Abi_Buckmaster in Under His Command (Scifi/Romance)

This is a great story so far. The author has built the main characters well and introduced the plot with ease. The synopsis is great, drawing readers into the story. The only fault I have found is with slow updates but as a fellow writer I understand that there are things that can get in the way. This story is one of my favorites at the moment and I'm excited to keep reading.