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Review Detail of Nikola1941 in THE RED UMBRELLA

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Currently this story feels like the first draft. It's clear the author has a story she wants to tell, but the current pace makes it impossible to breath and develop. I hope that there will be improvements in chapters to come.

THE RED UMBRELLA

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