Review Detail of zrx_8950 in Kenzai

The story is great, the characters, the vast world and story development is very well thought and is implemented into the chapters very well. The one con though is the punctuation and occasionally, the grammar. Sometimes it's hard to tell if Ken's thinking or having a flashback. Overall, the story is great and entertaining, and it always makes me want to read on more at the end of every chapter. It's just the small errors in writing that needs improving. Other than that, I want to find out what Ken does next and I'm looking forward to what ManjD has in store for Kenzai!