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Review at chapter 16 WQ 4 🌟 : This author is a good writer. Very few mistakes and all in all a pleasure to read. SD 1 🌟: That was awful. To begin, he is abandoned by his clan coz he had two Keikkei Genkai. Then he decided to hide his Keikkei Genkai. Now he's named Yuki and when he had to reveal one bloodline limit he reveals the Shikotsumyaku. After that he's ent to frontline and they managed to get ambushed in their own base. Then Sarutobi comes to attack himself (yes a Kage fighting in a little squirming like that). He managed to escape and years passed. He participated in Rin incident and was quick enough to flee before Obito's rampage. Then suicide mission after suicide mission. There you think that's it. Obito discovered his implication in the matter and wants to kill him. But no, nothing. He could have been framed as a traitor, he could have been outrightly killed but nothing. Then he let Kakashi in battle and beat him (it's normal) but doesn't kill him. It doesn't make any sense. It's stupid. CD 2 🌟: I would've given zero stars if I only focused on MC character. First point, each time he should react promptly he freezes then do something stupid: At the robbery in his first life, when his mother was defending him, during the test at the academy,... Second point, what's his goal. His said he wants to change the world and his village. Ok, that's the kind of idiotic and delusional thing every MC does. But how does he want to change it? Just destroy canon? I don't think so. He had his fair chance of doing that by killing a plot relevant character. By changing the world in an utopia? I don't think so otherwise he should join Akatsuki and help Madara achieve his goal. I came to the conclusion that despite his claim of wanting to have an impact on the world, he is doing his max to preserve canon. Otherwise just saving his clan would have been impactful enough. Third point, why was he even an SI? I think any random child with delayed emotions who obtain flashes of the future would have been as good as him. The only use he does of his canon knowledge so far is recognizing canon characters and using Haki and Kimimaro jutsus. He is as loyal to the village as any brainwashed kids would be. Even more as Zabuza and Kisame will betray the village. They are sending him on suicide mission after suicide mission and his only reason to stay in the village is that he wanted to change the village. He's the Mizukage loyal dog even though he knows he is controlled by others. He claims that he wants to save his companions but takes stupid decision after stupid decision (for their assassination, they should have just gone straight to kill their target without any attempt at infiltration and it would have been more stealthy and intelligent than what they had done). Anyways, others characters are well written enough, the hot headed teenager, his crazy father (I suppose), Ao,... US 4 🌟: For what I'm seeing all those sixteen chapters have been dropped yesterday. I have my doubts but 4 🌟 for now. WB 2 🌟: The ages aren't consistent with canon. Ao is 8 years older than MC who is 3 years younger than Zabuza. He should have been older. Anyway all those aren't important. What's important is the absurdity of the test they make the kids pass to become genin considering their situation (they were in war and in need of cannon fodder) and Kakashi Saïd that the test was a one vs one fight to death not some battle royale. How absurd was their war: Kiri nin hiding in trench's against potential earth Jutsu users, how disorganized were their troops, why would Kage broadcast their locations. MC was trapped and on the verge of dying and two Root shinobi against him. Three Kiri shinobi come and the Root Shinobi abandon their mission. Yes you didn't read wrong. MC is leading a team of elites only weaker than the 7 Swordmen. They were four in all and their mission, kidnap Naruto. Okay, they got surprised by a random team of Konoha (an Uchiha, an Inuzuka and an Akimichi). MC take care of the Uchiha and it wasn't easy. The others three elites lose against the two from Konoha and two died and the last one saved by MC. The same MC that difficulty kill a random Uchiha quickly kill two Abby and beat Kakashi (and doesn't kill him because?) and come back to save his teammates. Now, the question is: If any random ninja of Konoha is stronger than elites of other villages why does these villages still fight? I will stop here. If all previous points are acceptable to you go read it, it's a good find.
Naruto: Of Bone and Ice
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that wansn't a skirmish that was the frontline the hokage being a reinforcement is completly logical especialy if there is no troupes to spare and the tides were changing. Also never is it mentioned that obito has noticed his escape, zetsu is the one that collects info and why would he frame a chunin he doesn't he realy give a fuk about chunnin.
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I mean the kage has to fight sometimes it's not so hard to believe the third hokage attacked on the frontlines himself your under the fake assumption that kage don't do things themselves yes they don't if the village isn't at war but if it's war then they are going with their army of ninja to the frontlines to shake things up a bit. The battle royal part and the the bloodline part was a mistake by the author but still even if the uchiha the mc fought wasn't mentioned in the anime he should still be strong i mean the sharingan is a cheat That's why it's one of the most powerful doujutsu even with two other bloodline abilities the mc should still have a hard time fighting a sharingan user plus the fact that the mc's team is only second to the seven swords man doesn't mean that they are overpowered maybe they are stronger than the other teams but way weaker than the seven swordsman plus just cause the does two jonian were from clans that aren't that overpowered in the anime doesn't mean their weak to me the authors version is more realistic. And about the kage telling were he is that's also a strategic move that way he knows for sure that his enemy will be send a lot of forces to combat him giving him many advantages such has to strike in other places with strong ninja while the enemy his fighting him or to use this has a chance to spread out the enemies main force by leaking more information of other places he'll send his forces to so that they attack certain areas giving him the opportunity to attack key areas such has the the food supplying team of the enemy forces or even the village. Also killing kakashi will mess up the plot making it unfixable even if he's strong it doesn't mean that he can fight madara and his team by himself the mc just needs to be strong enough to survive if he kills kakashi who's going to take his place?
completly disagree with you hogakes can fight in the war. kakashi not being killed isnt that hard to comprehend he didnt have the time chakra or the energy especialy against a guy like kakashi who can have a trump card. imlo one of the mosqt logiacal story of naruto in it's plot develepoment no rinnegfan or tenseigan from the start i hate when the MC becomes biology major out of nowhere and mixes his genes like it was an omelette
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I see a lot of excuses and justifications in the comments for this review. However, it seems no one has stopped to wonder why it is the readers that have to create justifications and excuses instead of the writer including justification in his own story in the first place. Doesn't this fact speak for itself?
Well the story is the kind u turn your brain off for I don't have problems with fights with mc bc I feel the fights don't contradict power scaling, like it's not out norm for lesser clans to be produce super strong ppl , jiraya is from the ogata clan and we all know he could beat almost every from the Uchiha as far as he knows plus they go out of their way in the anime to say Uchiha clan is one of the greatest clans in the nations plus elite ninja (can have different tiers of strength, I mean kakashi is an elite jonin in beginning of part 1 and he was an A rank nin , asuma was also included as elite and we know that kakashi would have washed him from feats shown and it was never stated the Akatsuki are the only S rank nin and the writer went out of his way to hype up opponents , the assination mission it was stated that the target will have S ranked and A ranked Shinobi, the Uchiha he fought likely would have been an A rank bc it seems an A rank is what u need to become elite plus kakashi likely wouldn't have become strongest at the time and didn't the 2nd hokage , 2nd tsuchikage, 2nd mizukage , 3rd raikage fight in wars
midgetydeath:I see a lot of excuses and justifications in the comments for this review. However, it seems no one has stopped to wonder why it is the readers that have to create justifications and excuses instead of the writer including justification in his own story in the first place. Doesn't this fact speak for itself?
Plus the author shouldn't explain everything for u , Naruto also does this the only difference is kishimoto is better at covering his tracks
midgetydeath:I see a lot of excuses and justifications in the comments for this review. However, it seems no one has stopped to wonder why it is the readers that have to create justifications and excuses instead of the writer including justification in his own story in the first place. Doesn't this fact speak for itself?
2nd hokage , 2nd tsuchikage, 2nd mizukage , 3rd raikage have been confirmed to have participated in one of great wars with first 3 kages dying in the first one and the 3rd raikage dying in the 3rd war
Yans_Tad:completly disagree with you hogakes can fight in the war. kakashi not being killed isnt that hard to comprehend he didnt have the time chakra or the energy especialy against a guy like kakashi who can have a trump card. imlo one of the mosqt logiacal story of naruto in it's plot develepoment no rinnegfan or tenseigan from the start i hate when the MC becomes biology major out of nowhere and mixes his genes like it was an omelette
How??? his actively trying fix things befriended the six tails , saved the kaguya from complete annihilation, prevented kimimaro and haku from dying, became mizukage, only thing is missing is learn put more emotion into his writing
Trollface:I'll just add that I don't understand how this nonsense got a rating of 4.6. MC diligently plays the role of story furniture.
Yans_Tad:completly disagree with you hogakes can fight in the war. kakashi not being killed isnt that hard to comprehend he didnt have the time chakra or the energy especialy against a guy like kakashi who can have a trump card. imlo one of the mosqt logiacal story of naruto in it's plot develepoment no rinnegfan or tenseigan from the start i hate when the MC becomes biology major out of nowhere and mixes his genes like it was an omelette