Review Detail of MKFish in Microscopic Leviathan

I really liked the opening, it was really catchy and interesting, it caught my interest. Also, the title is pretty mysterious and it grabbed me in. Your writing is really nice and the words you use are new to me. I'm not sure if the story will develop better in later updates, but the story is already good actually. I really respect how you insert details, in way that's not boring.