Review Detail of Manuekmgc in Naruto World's Shadow lord [COMPLETED]
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i really like the idea ( i know that shadows powers arent new but they still are cool) , the nara clan can give a lot of posibilities. i would suggest you to write more dialogues bettwen the characters ( even if the dialogue is only a chat bettwen friends , with his family or with the love interest 😏) to make us feel the OC more integreted and feel the world more real. This is just my personal preference , anyways , great job and a very good fanfic. (if you read some error , i am spanish xd)
Naruto World's Shadow lord [COMPLETED]
letiul_umanga
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letiul_umanga:well i will try to add more chat , currently i have been focusing on how to make Mc sudden power up so ,just after sorting that out , from chapter 12 i will add more of the chat between team mates , thanks for the review
well basically mc has a blond hair fetish and liked the character Yamanaka Ino he will pursue Ino in the time skip part of Naruto and Naruto Shippuden , well there will be some chapter with romantic part at most 5-7 chapters but the fan-fic won't fully focus on romantic part , .....
UrizenVergil:is there a romantic part in the novel like mc have a lover
letiul_umanga:well basically mc has a blond hair fetish and liked the character Yamanaka Ino he will pursue Ino in the time skip part of Naruto and Naruto Shippuden , well there will be some chapter with romantic part at most 5-7 chapters but the fan-fic won't fully focus on romantic part , .....
ya thanks to your idea i droped ino and targeted Samui , as mc like strong women and samui has that quality of strong and mainly her character is different form other so , thanks for the idea ma , just today i wrote the chapter where mc met Samui , i am waiting for some more ideas share if you have time
DumbDolphin:Then, maybe you can add or consider Shion as a Love Interest? Maybe Samui or Yugito?